Not bad at all. You even layered the frames and everything!

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Neat
I'm taking a 2d animation class right now, so my crit-eye sez:

The bouncing could definitely use more drawings. It's a bit on the abrupt side. The wing unfurling is very nicely done, but some follow-through would make the ending better.

The end! ^_^
I'd like to see more of these, by the way

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Ohh...that's really neat. ^^ I think some more of the bird at the end would add a little bit to the animation. But what you have is great.

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Hey ALIRIGHT!!!!! That is a SWEET pencil test animation and I can't wait to see what else you have produced. You are really doing well! Wish I could animate like that!

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smooth.

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Yup. Thanks to monkey jam ^^

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OH yeah, thats what everyone says! MOAR. XDDD I wish I could but eh. Perhaps ill put it into the pencil test program again and put the holds on 3s instead of 2s. That should definitely get it going slower and not have the ending so abrupt.

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If only I had more time D| Thanks though! I think perhaps one day if im up for it, ill add more to it. I dont know what should happen afterwards though. The assignment was just to do a bouncing ball ya know XD

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